when fear creeps in, exposition follows
- Michael David
- 3 days ago
- 2 min read
Exposition is the information the audience needs in order to understand what’s happening — who these people are, how this world works, what happened before now and what’s at stake.
Exposition is pressure.
It’s the past intruding on the present. It’s context arriving at a moment when it’s inconvenient, painful or destabilizing.
What counts as exposition
Backstory (shared history, trauma, relationships)
World rules (social, political, emotional)
Offstage events that shape current action
Hidden motives or prior decisions
Stakes the characters may already understand, but the audience doesn’t
What exposition is not
A summary for the audience
A pause in the drama
Characters explaining things they’d never say out loud
Good vs. bad exposition
Bad exposition answers questions the audience hasn’t asked yet.
Good exposition answers questions only because something just changed.
Handling exposition well is mostly about hiding the medicine in the meal. A few practical principles:
Make exposition do double duty
If information doesn’t also advance conflict, character or desire, it will feel inert. Let facts arrive while someone wants something and someone else resists.
Bad: “As you know, we grew up here.”
Better: “You left the first chance you got — don’t pretend this place didn’t raise you.”
Let characters reveal, not report
People rarely explain things neutrally. They distort, withhold, exaggerate or weaponize information. That bias is what makes exposition dramatic.
Use implication and gaps
Trust the audience. Give 70% of the information and let them assemble the rest. What you don’t say often carries more charge than what you do.
Break exposition into fragments
Instead of one big explanation, scatter it across scenes, lines, or episodes. Repetition with variation helps comprehension without boredom.
Anchor exposition in the body or action
Physical behavior can carry information:
Avoiding eye contact
A ritual repeated too carefully
A pause before a name is spoken
Save blunt exposition for emotional peaks
If someone finally says the thing out loud, make it cost them something. Confession works when it’s late, pressured or dangerous.
Ask: Why now?
If the answer isn’t “because something will go wrong if they don’t,” reconsider the moment.

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